Tuesday, April 13, 2010

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Human Services A.S. Degree Visual- A picture of of the Lyndon Campus to use as a background in the actual ad.

Headline- Earn a degree hassle free

Swing Line- Want to be able to earn a degree in less time and still be able to interact with a professor directly?

Body Copy-Lyndon is offering an Associates in Science that would require only 27 credits. If you don't have the time to committ to a full class schedule, then Lyndon's new degree is ideal for you. Earn a professional degree that will qualify you for entry level human services fields.

Logo- Lyndon State College's official seal

1 comment:

  1. Headline: This sounds nice, but readers won't know you're talking about an associate's degree. You could use "Associate's degree -- hassle free" or focus on the benefit: job-ready in less time.
    Subhead:?
    Swing line: avoid wordy phrases. "Want to be able to earn a degree" becomes "Get a degree".
    Body copy: mention human services here. Correct style is associate of science degree. Rather than "If you don't have the time..." say "Ideal for busy people." "Entry level" has a negative connotation; try "get your start". Can you elaborate on "human services fields"? Does everybody know what they are?

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