Human Services Associates Degree
Title: New Degree
Client/Sponsor: Human Services Department
Length: 30 seconds
Air Dates: NA
Too busy to go to college full-time? Don’t think you can afford
four years of college in today’s economy? Now you can with
Lyndon’s new Associates Degree in Human Services. For only 27 credit hours, you can earn a degree that will give you the tools to gain entry level positions in human services, as well as allow you to work with actual professors with experience in the field. Contact Lyndon today to start earning your degree tomorrow.
There are a couple of logical inconsistencies you'll want to clear up before you submit this to your client.
ReplyDeleteThe phrase "Now you can" means the listener can now "afford four years of college." You're trying to say something else.
The phrase "allow you to work with actual professors" means the listener will work with the professors after the degree is earned.
Submit your final version to the client and then send me the approved script, and I'll pass it along to the radio station.