Mountain East Medical Hospital names new purchasing chief.
Johnny Toler will replace Bob Wilkinson as the head of the purchasing department. Wilkinson came to MEMC in 1975 after working for a small rural community hospital. “Bob’s abilities will be greatly missed,” says Hospital Adminstrator Harry Illscott., “but I know that Johnny Toler is a person who we can all depend on to do whatever is necessary to keep his department going. Wilkinson will take a job with City Memorial Hospital.
Toler began as the assistant druggist in the hospital pharmacy 13 years ago before being moved to the purchasing department as assistant head of the department. Toler’s wife, Carolyn, is head of the gynecology department at MEMC. “This hospital means a great deal to me and my family, and I will give my best efforts to making our purchasing department the best,” Toler said. “I learned from a fine man—Bob Wilkinson—and I hope I can continue to build on the foundation he established.”
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